Shattered souls so lost in their pain, they forget you too could be hurting.
Broken shards can never sympathize with the hand that bleeds to put them back together.
Shattered souls so lost in their pain, they forget you too could be hurting.
Broken shards can never sympathize with the hand that bleeds to put them back together.
Sheer Elegance! I just loved the way you compared broken shards with shattered souls! Last line just got to me (Contemplation Mode ON)! Simply Beautiful! 🙂
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I’m glad you liked the piece. We are all broken beautifully, we’re all a work of art. 🙂
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Yes exactly! I guess we are all artists in our own way, with our lives being our greatest creative expression. I loved the last line very much, i shared it with some of my friends, i must say it is a very intelligent piece of writing! 🙂
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Yes I agree with you completely. I couldn’t be happier, so glad it’s something that caught your attention. Thank you for sharing and appreciating. 🙂
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Oh your posts are always worth a read! 🙂 Something I don’t want to miss! 🙂
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Maybe so, but they carry forever the bloody mark of the hands that bled for their sake…
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Scarred and stained – lethal combination 😀 This seemed like an incomplete piece when I wrote it, thank you for making it whole with this comment. 🙂
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I’m glad you liked it. Your piece was Complete, this was just a post script. 🙂
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Ha ha. Alright. I’ll take it at that. Thank you for stopping by 🙂
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So true. Broken souls think only they can be broken. Well written! And love image too!
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Thank you, I’m glad you liked it. Can’t take credit for the picture though 🙂 And yes, some of us are too selfish in our pain. We forget everyone is hurting inside. Have a nice day 🙂
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Reblogged this on Living with depression.
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Sharp insight – your poems are solid, profound. Glad I found you.
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Thank you for stopping by and reading. I’m so glad you could relate to the content I put up. Have a splendid day! 🙂
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